GREAT Photos, JDM; of one of my favorite parks...altho I've never been there at 3 A.M.! I thought they closed the gates at sundown.
I've done some light painting, mostly using electronic flash. Whoever said watch those artifacts was right. MOVE that light! I found out the hard way when using a flashlight in conjunction with my electronic flash, to take photos of freeway roadbed damage. A definite " learning experience"!
If I were trying that again, I would probably use an incand MagLite for throw and power, maybe lightly diffused, with the camera white balance pre-set at Incand. That may be too small for your projects, tho. TRIPOD!
I think if you can do most of the manipulation in-camera, you're ahead of the game.
My thing was to dress in dark clothing, plan what I wanted to light, then walk quickly through the exposure area with my electronic flash, IF the exposure was long enough. 30 sec. is obviously not enough, unless you are really fast! A willing assistant helps, like my voice activated, carbon-based remote...my granddaughter.